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(I wrote this on my Quibblo account a while back! I'll post more chapters later!)
Sakura's pov
"Holy crap! Look at the billboard brow! Hey Chochi, do you see how big this Chunins' forehead is?!" shouted the rogue ninja by the name of Mizukashi we'd been fighting for the past hour or so. "Hey! Its not that large!!!!" I shouted throwing my hand in front of my forehead. "Well I'd like to think that anyways.."
"Don't worry, Sakura, your brow is the right size. I think u look fine," said Sasuke. Did he say what i think he said?!! I cant believe Sauske gave me a compliment!!! I could also feel my face burning with hope that maybe,  just maybe Sasuke and I would have a chance at actually dating.
   I flashed back to when I first met Ino. She was so kind to me when otheres werent. She helped me become who I am today. Too bad we couldnt still be friends..
  I smiled to myself as I threw a kunai knife at Mizukashi and caught him in the shoulder. He'd been distracted by his foolish laughter and he certinly payed for it. Hunching over in pain, he pulled the kunai from his flesh.
"You know for a rogue ninja, you're not very smart or fast." Naruto shouted at him betweed gasps of laughter.  
  "Shut your mouth you stupid faced brat!" Chochi (or whatever the teen who'd been with Mizukashi was called) shouted at me. She looked furiously into my eyes and pulled out 5 shuriken. She hurled them at me but caught naruto in the thigh and nearly caught a passing rabbit in the ear. These were some pretty weak rogue ninja. Maybe since L

ord Hokage knew they were so weak, thats why he sent uson this lame mission. I looked back up and realized that Mizukashi had dissapeared during the ruckus. where did he go?!

Sasuke's pov
"Where did Mizukashi go!?" I murmured. Then my question was answered. His kunai was digging into my stomach right as I'd uttered those words. I was paralyzed. paralasys justs I thought, angry for letting my guard down. I spit up blood as he dug the kunai deeper.
"SASUKE-KUN!" shouted Sakura.  
Then I felt Mizukashi's chakra falter as he was hurled away from me by some unseen force. I focused my mind and reverted my eyes to use Sharingan to see if someone else was here or if it'd been Naruto who'd merely barreled into Mizukashi. That idea was proved wrong in an instant as Naruto whispered "who did that?"
"Lets hope he's on our side and not just trying to finish us himself." I replied grimly. Sakura's jaw dropped as she registered what had just happened. Then I saw a figure silently and extermely quickly jump into a tree. My shurikin was at the persons feet the instant I'd seen the movement.  
"Woah! What was that about? I just saved your life and you try killing me?!" shouted the figure in the tree. who was this being? They were still hiding behind the tree trunk.
"If your going to save our lives, at least give us the privelege to see your face." I said, grimacing, as the pain in my gut started to worsen. Then she stepped stoutly onto the branch. Her eyes blased with the power of Sharingan. In each of her glowing eyes was an odd shape of Sharingan definition I had never seen before. She looked powerful; almost too powerful for her age. I'll admit she is a little bit pretty. i thought.  
"My name's Akemi." she said with a calm smile. Her eyes flashed back to the aparently original color of purpelish black.  
"'Scuse me but what is your name? I believe it's 'Sauske-kun!!'" Akemi mimmicked Sakura in a high pitched, whiny scream that seemed to match almost perfectly to Sakura's.
"It's good to see you Akemi! this is Naruto and Sakura. " Kakashi said with delight.  
"EEEHHH? You two have met!???" screamed Sakura with enormous surprise.
"Yes, Sakura. She is my younger sister after all."
This time I was the one going, "EHHH?! Kakashi Sensei, she looks more powerful than you though!" He looked absolutely embarrassed when he murmured, " She is."
"How is that possible Kakashi Sensei?! Shes gotta be only 14 or so!" Naruto shouted, eyes bulging in the direction of Akemi, tieing up Chochi along with Mizukashi. I hadn't even seen her attack them. Well she did quite a thurough job because there were senbon sticking out of their necks and chests. Blood was running down from their scalps and from huge gashes in Chochis' arms. I drew my mind away from Akemi and back to the conversation. Apparently she had gotten more Sharingan than kakashi and also she was a member of every village. So thats why she had the head bands of each hidden village hanging from different places on her body.  
"Akemi!" Kakashi choked as she sprinted over and wrapped her arms around his neck, "Where is your squad?" When he asked that, she paused and jumped down to sit on the dirt.
"Th-they all died. Even Misasaze....." she whispered.  
"How?" Kakashi knelt down and grasped her shoulder. "How did they die?"

Akemi pov
"How; how did they die?" Kakashi 'neechan asked. I paused and remembered the attack and began speaking; "The ninja came from everywhere. They were from the village hidden in sound. We were completely unprepared and outnumbered 7 to 1. It was too much for our squad to handel. I was the only one with Sharingan but i barely made it out myself. I tried protecting them but they had seperated us. I couldn't get to them in time. It was no use, so I escaped, fleeing to the village hidden in leaves.. But I found you on the way, niisan and saw your team needed help so I thought I should stop bye. I can't stand back up, my Sharingan has worn me down and I have alot of wounds I need to  trea-"

Sasuke pov
   Then she fainted. Kakashi looked up at the setting sun playing off the leaves and sat still as a statue with that bored look on his face as usual. The unusual part was that his eyebrows were pinched together.
"Sensei, I can carry her back." I volunteered trying not to show my interest in her squads unexplained assassination.  
"Be careful with her, she is strong like a tree yet also delicate like a flower," was his reply.
I gently picked her up and slung her over my shoulder. This was easier than carrying Sakura when she was scared half to death in the Chunin Exams I thought, with true surprise. Akemi had long grey-ish hair like Kakashi's. Her arms were soft but scarred with burns and cuts. Her eyelashes were long and her face smooth. You would have never have guessed that this girl was a ninja if it werent for the bands from the villages.  My eyes fell from her face as we began hopping through the trees to bring Lord Hokage the mission report and the rogue ninja. Akemi's heartbeat slowed as we fell into the rythmic pattern of hopping from branch to branch.  

Naruto pov
This mysterious girl just appears out of nowhere and happens to be Kakashi's sister?!  She's alot cuter than Sakura, too.  How is she a ninja stronger than Kakashi? Im so confused.... i looked over to Sasuke carrying Akemi, and he was actually blushing! EEHH!? Don't tell me he actually thinks shes cute too!?? Ma-ta-kehh... (seriously?!) The moon played off her hair and made it looked like silk flowing in the wind. She was more than cute, she was beautiful.  
Finally we arrived back at the village and handed in the mission report.  
"Aah finally, were back! I was starting to fall asleep when we were tree hopping. Hahaa!" Sasuke and Sakura both glared at me and put a finger to their lips and whispered "SHHH! Shes sleeping!" in unison.
"Let's head over to my home, we can let my little sister recouperate there. She will be safe with me." Kakashi said as we started walking again.  
"Well im tired you guys! I'll see you tomorrow!!! A great ninja needs his sleep!" I turned the other way and headed home.  

Sakura pov
How did this loser get Sasuke's attention?! Shes not even pretty. I mean she has all these scars on her. Fair skin is the key to a mans heart,  not scars and scratches!! I must learn her secret!!! CHA! I punched the air in front of me and Sasuke glanced over and gave me a puzzled look.  
"Uhm sorry. I was just thinking how interesting today was." I don't think he bought it.. Cripes! Now I look like an even bigger idiot!
"Ahh weve finally reached Kakashi senseis house!" I whispered excitedly. We have never been to his home before, so this was an exciting first!

Sasuke pov
We entered through the rice paper screens. My stomach wound was still bleeding so I needed to sit down, but not yet.  
"Up stairs is her old room, she can stay there for now," Kakashi said quietly.  
"Why does she have a room here if you havent seen her in years?" Sakura asked Kakashi.  
"Because we both grew up here. This is our clans old home.." he replied in a hushed tone. I layed Akemi on her futon and sat down in a chair next to it. I pulled some bandages out of my pouch and pulled my shirt up to wrap up my stomach. The exhaustion finally settled and the next time I opened my eyes, it was morning.
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Hey, my name is Ed. I've been writing my novel, The Fallen Star. I've recently finished posting the entire book! I would love if a few people could read through it and tell me what they think; I would love to get it published one day =D

Siale was no longer safe for the Watchers; they were forced to flee from the city. Little did Rantil know that his life was going to change forever. He was about to be caught in an age-old battle between the Chalders of Ciameth and the Demons of Dremnor. He was Truaine's only hope.

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